Comments on: Slow Down, Mona Lisa http://www.excelanoproject.com/2009/slow-down-mona-lisa/ Official blog of UPenn's spoken word poetry collective, The Excelano Project Tue, 31 Aug 2010 18:15:03 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Melissa Pavri http://www.excelanoproject.com/2009/slow-down-mona-lisa/comment-page-1/#comment-296 Melissa Pavri Wed, 28 Oct 2009 21:24:16 +0000 http://www.excelanoproject.com/?p=525#comment-296 be my sun just a lil while longer not some distant star that waves on the off chance there’s a clear night in NY mmm sooo OD be my sun just a lil while longer
not some distant star that waves
on the off chance there’s a clear night in NY

mmm sooo OD

]]> By: Brandi http://www.excelanoproject.com/2009/slow-down-mona-lisa/comment-page-1/#comment-295 Brandi Wed, 28 Oct 2009 16:24:30 +0000 http://www.excelanoproject.com/?p=525#comment-295 "...be my sun just a lil while longer not some distant star that waves on the off chance there’s a clear night in NY ...let me lay you down so the sandy soul inside your hourglass sits still I know they say you won’t wait for me that I’d just be wasting you that I can’t stop you or bring you back but what they say has never moved me only you can" that sums it up. does it for me, definitely. MUCH peace on that. “…be my sun just a lil while longer
not some distant star that waves
on the off chance there’s a clear night in NY

…let me lay you down
so the sandy soul inside your hourglass
sits still
I know they say you won’t wait for me
that I’d just be wasting you
that I can’t stop you or bring you back
but what they say has never moved me

only you can”

that sums it up. does it for me, definitely.

MUCH peace on that.

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